Amazing Kids! Magazine

The Incomplete Soul

By Tarnprit D, age 13, Washington


I am a neglected person, a heart that can’t love.
I am a brain without thoughts, a fish without water.
I am a person that is rich but still poor, a car without an engine
I am water that can’t replenish, a husband without a wife.
I am a killer that can’t kill, an explorer with no destination.
I am a person that is honored but not respected
I am an Incomplete Soul.


  1. Tarnprit /

    Thank you Tyler

  2. Tyler /

    That poem is deep and I enjoyed it.